DEVELOPING AN ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPHY

Anne Fields, Education Librarian , and Marti Alt, General Humanities Bibliographer

Ohio State University Libraries

 


 

 

v      What is a bibliography?

 

A bibliography is list of sources that you have consulted for information.  It differs from a works cited list in that a works cited list includes only sources which you have actually quoted, paraphrased, or summarized in a paper or report.

 

v      What is an annotated bibliography?

 

Every citation in an annotated bibliography includes a brief summary of the source, along with typical publication information (author, title, date, etc.)  The summary can describe the information contained in the source, but it can also evaluate the information.   The first kind of annotation is called a "descriptive annotation," the second an "evaluative annotation."   

 

v      What is the difference between an annotation and an abstract?

 

An annotation is descriptive and/or evaluative, revealing the author’s authority and point of view and commenting on specific elements of the work (see below).   An abstract is strictly a descriptive summary of the work.

 

v      What should each entry in my annotated bibliography include?

 

v      A complete bibliographic citation  (Be sure to be consistent throughout.)

v      One or two sentences that capture the main idea(s) and coverage of the source

v      A description of the source's intended audience and purpose, form, arrangement, ease of use

v      A critique of the source's:

v      accuracy

v      objectivity (including both explicit and hidden biases)

v      authority (author's expertise with regard to this topic)

v      currency (if applicable to this topic)

v      A description of any special features, such as a useful bibliography or a list of Web sites

v      A reflection on the source's usefulness to you, particularly in comparison to other sources you have read on similar topics

 

v      What characterizes a well-written annotation?

 

v      Brevity (150-250 words; 2-3 paragraphs)

v      Conciseness (every word must count)

v      Complete sentences of varying lengths, or verb phrases (be consistent)

v      Only significant details and ideas included

v      No direct quotations or paraphrases. Use your own words.  Do not “borrow” from the abstract included with the article.

v      Correct bibliographic citation style

 

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v      Example:

 

Margonis, F., & Parker, L. (1999). Choice: The route to community control? Theory Into Practice, 38, 203-208. Retrieved January 24, 2001, from Education Abstracts on the World Wide Web:

http://www.ohiolink.edu/databases/login/edua.

 

In this article Margonis and Parker, Associate Professors of Education at the University of Utah and the University of Illinois at Champaign-Urbana respectively, argue the theory that, although minority parents who increasingly are sending their children to private schools may appear to share goals with conservative politicians, the goals of the two groups actually differ. 

 

Minority parents are using school vouchers to obtain a better education for their children than the public schools can provide.  Conservative politicians, the authors claim, are using vouchers to maintain a system of segregated schooling.  Margonis and Parker believe that minority parents unwittingly are buying into a conservative political strategy that only serves to worsen the educational system for other minority students.  While the authors display a bias against economically powerful white Republicans, neither are they sympathetic to liberal Democrats because they believe that liberal Democrats have failed inner city schools, too. 

 

The lengthy bibliography cites works published only through 1998, but the article gives a useful overview of the historical context of school vouchers and cites studies from respected journals and publishers.   I found it interesting that Dale McDonald’s (2000) more recent article cites liberal Democrats like Joseph Lieberman and Robert Reich as favoring vouchers, too.  McDonald also cites several other studies, published as recently as 1998, that show that African-American children did show higher achievement in voucher schools than in the public schools, although students from other ethnic groups did not appear to achieve any differently than they did in the public schools.  While McDonald might seem to be contradicting Margonis and Parker, however, I think that they are talking about two separate issues:  educational achievement and segregation.  This brings us back to the classic question of whether there really is such a thing as “separate but equal.”

 

 

v      Additional resources:

 

 

v      “Academic Writing: Annotated Bibliography.”  2003.  University of Wisconsin, Madison.  April 3, 2003 http://www.wisc.edu/writing/Handbook/AnnotatedBibliography.html

 

v      “Annotated Bibliography Criteria.”  Fall 2002.  Syracuse University.  April 3, 2003.  http://web.syr.edu/~hmsheare/revisedannotated.html

 

v      Engle, Michael, Amy Blumenthal, and Toy Cosgrave.  “How to Prepare an Annotated Bibliography.”  November 20, 2003.  Cornell University.  April 3, 2003 http://www.library.cornell.edu/okuref/research/skill28.htm

 

v      “Help in Writing Annotations.”  Bucknell University.  April 3, 2003  http://www.isr.bucknell.edu/Research_Tools/Doing_research/annotations.asp

 

v      Kirk, Tom.  “Writing Annotations: Research Tips.”  May 23, 2001.  Earlham College.   April 3, 2003   <http://www.earlham.edu/~libr/courses/annotations.htm>

 

v      “Learning Support Services: Help in Writing Annotations.”  University of Massachusetts.  April 3, 2003.  http://www.umass.edu/lss/handouts/Annotations,%20help%20in%20writing.htm

 

v      Vogt, Judy.  “Writing Critical Annotations, Abstracts and Critiques”.   September 30, 2002. University of Lethbridge.  April 3, 2003  <http://www.uleth.ca/lib/guides/critical-annotation.shtml>

 

v      “Writing an Annotated Bibliography.”  July 1, 2002.  Anne Arundel Community College.  April 3, 2003.  <http://www.aacc.cc.md.us/libinst/guides/annotatedbib.pdf>

 

v      “Writing Annotations.”  July 1, 2002. University of Toledo Libraries.  April 3, 2003.  <http://www.cl.utoledo.edu/info/guides/annot2.html>                                            

April, 2003